I saw people driving home from work.
I heard noisy kids playing at the back of the fence.
I heard people crying as I was enjoying myself.
I smelt the mouse as I looked at the moon.
I smelt smoke fish as I was looking at the kids.
I tasted mouse in my mouth as a was day dreaming.
I tasted yummy cat cookies as I tried to spy for a rubbish bin.
I wondered if the kids still play at the back of my fence .
I wondered kids still cried while they’re playing
Siu
Great writing, Siu. You worked really hard on this. Well done!
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